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Shadows of my cycle.

அமாவாசையும் அவ‌ர் சைக்கிளும்

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If some­one asked me in 6th or 7th std about the goal in life, I would have said noth­ing but own­ing a BSA SLR. Nobody in our fam­i­lies owned a bicy­cle, those days. My uncle was the only per­son in the fam­ily who knows how to ride a cycle [ he rents ]. That too he uses that only based on busi­ness require­ments [ buy­ing lico coal for his machine shop fur­nace :) ]. He was not patient enough to teach cycling to us. We mostly depended on the teenage seniors in this sit­u­a­tion. Don’t imag­ine that our teenage seniors going to col­lege or doing bet­ter things in life. They work in either work­shops or a store at the maximum.

The pre­siti­gious jobs in my home­town were — a sales­man in any tex­tile shop [ javuli kadai alla kadal ] , con­duc­tor, high school teacher or an accoun­tant sit­ting in the store with a list­pad and a wooden ball point pen with­out cap [ வ‌ழ‌ வ‌ழ‌ன்னு எழுதும் ]. The work­shops I told about, run through out the month except on new moon days. New moon days were spe­cial to me because that’s when the fam­i­lies used to have some spe­cial tif­fin in the night [ except idli :) ]. Due to traf­fic in Chen­nai, I was not allowed to try cycling till my 5th std. As a Chen­nai based kid, I felt very insult­ing to run a sin­gle tyre or a cycle wheel [ upper class :) ]. So we used to wait for new moon days.

In new moon days, fam­ily out­ing hap­pens and the work­ers union meet­ing hap­pens. The work­shop teenagers go out to Kanchipu­ram for watch­ing the new films. And most impor­tantly that’s when the seniors help us in teach­ing our cycle lessons. It all starts from sav­ing money for a period of 15 days. We used to make friend­ship with “Jamaal” brother [ ஜ‌மாலுத்தீன் சைக்கிள் வாட‌கை நிலைய‌ம்] to just develop a rap­port. And on the D day, we have to wait for the cycle. All the rival chil­dren group fight for the same cycle [ there were only 2 small cycles ]. After check­ing the time repeat­edly, we finally used to get the cycle. After tak­ing to our street by just mov­ing the cycle, we start our cycle lessons.

A sub-plot story.. [ பெரிய‌ ஸ்க்ரிப்ட் ரைட்ட‌ர் இவ‌ரு..]. One of fam­ily friend used to visit us reg­u­larly. I some­how request and con­vince him to take his cycle away — it was a BSA SLR ladies cycle. We used to roam in that cycle for a longer period and come by the time our con­duc­tor uncle is about to leave. One day, for a change we took the cycle to a ground and ended up with 6 punc­tures in the back wheel. After that inci­dent, he never gave the cycle to us. We too nei­ther ques­tioned him why nor asked for the key again.

Mahalingam annan [ work­ing in my uncle’s work­shop ] was my senior rel­a­tive who taught me cycling. It was a bit tough learn­ing cycling with­out dash­ing on the wall or run­ning into the houses. I never liked mon­key ped­alling [ arai ped­alling ] — the ugly way of cycling. So we tried our classes with the small cycles and bribe as much as pos­si­ble to Mahalingam to get the trick of cycling. I won­der how Mahalingam could ride a cycle hands free. That was the high­est trick I could imag­ine. Days passed by and I was on the same stage. Mahalingam scolded me heav­ily on one new moon day and i was very upset. He laughed at me stat­ing that I never can learn cycling. With that dis­ap­point­ment, the same day I tried mul­ti­ple times and finally rode it well. I man­aged to stop and get down too. But I noted that remarks of Mahalingam deeply.

Then I skipped vis­it­ing my tutor and started cycling on my own. Mahalingam didn’t worry about that. He con­tin­ued his work and dreams with cut­ting metal sheets and join­ing them. I was a great fan of comics [ Muthu, Lion and Rani comics too ]. We the chil­dren gang, used to search for some­thing always and I am fond of read­ing the bit pieces of paper. One fine day, I found a let­ter writ­ten by Mahalingam and about kid­nap­ping my aunt’s daugh­ter and set­tling with his own work­shop in Kallaku­ruchi. We can­not expect much from a per­son whose life was just made up of metal sheets. My cousin [ அத்தை பொண்ணும் க‌ஸின் தானே [ பின்ன‌ என்ன‌ அஸின்னா இருக்கும் ]] started cry­ing that some­body really would kid­nap her and marry. To con­vince her and Keep­ing my vengeance in mind, I have handed over the let­ter to my uncle directly. I never knew the consequences.

It was as good as inform­ing about Aiswarya [ Pechiyam­mal ] and Mechanic Muru­gan to the Din­du­gal wine shop owner Rajendi­ran [ காத‌ல் ப‌ட‌ம் பார்க்க‌லையா ??!! ]. My uncle smashed Mahalingam in pieces. He begged that he comit­ted a mis­take. For a work­shop owner with a sin­gle daugh­ter, that let­ter looked like a life time crime. They hit him heav­ily and packed him back to Kallaku­ruchi. Every­body started call­ing me as a CID. By the time, I realised my mis­take, much dam­ages has hap­pened to Mahalingam already. I never met him in life, again.

Few years later, in my 10th std my father bought me a BSA deluxe cycle with white washed tyres. The very first day we did some rit­u­als to the cycle and dec­o­rated. I couldn’t even sleep that day out of joy. For me, it was a life time dream com­ing true and for other school mates it’s just a cycle. Mad­han already owned a BSA Mach then [ அதை ஓட்ற‌துக்கு விர‌ல் தெரிய‌ற‌ க்ள‌வுஸ் வேற‌ :) ]. The next morn­ing, I went to my early morn­ing maths tuition. One the way back, in a junc­tion sud­denly, I felt a inter­rup­tion in the flow and fell down [ முனி அடிச்சிருக்குமோ ??!! ]. I checked rid­ing the cycle repeat­edly and fell down fewer times. As Sujatha said in “Arisi” short story my “thi­nai arivu” was dif­fer­ent from cycle mech­a­nism [ அவ‌ர் திணை ப‌த்தி பேச‌லாம்.. நீ ?! ]. I took the cycle to “Jamaal” and explained. He laughed at me say­ing that I was not eli­gi­ble to own a cycle. He went out for a ride and while com­ing back he was strolling the cycle with a mark in his knee. I laughed back at him.

The tech­nol­ogy with BSA deluxe cycle was that it had a spe­cial fea­ture called fore­lock [ பெரிய‌ ABS break sys­tem ]. The fore­lock was open and in react­ing to any jerk, the fore­lock auto­mat­i­cally gets locked. That’s the rea­son for the sud­den stop­page [ முனிக்கு வேற‌ வேலை இல்லை ?! ]. This is what explained by our cycle GDNaidu Jamaal. Due to his anger, he per­ma­nently broke the forelock.

I returned back home and said this to my mother. While I was wash­ing the face, my mother asked me whether Mahalingam might have thought about me and my new cycle. After wash­ing my face [ I can­not open eyes with froth in face — my cousin does :) ], I said ‘Cer­tainly not’. I know my cycle guru very much — he was a very good person.

Do u know Mahalingam’s address ?

–Toto

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3 Comments

  1. Came across as a short story/ almost.the end is a bit artificial.u wud have scored much higher if u had expressed the entire story /sequence in tamil . the story has comedy(Jamal GD Naidu,forelock,repeated ‘muni ’ attack),one side love(mahalingam’s ambi­tion?), sud­den turnaround(handing over let­ter to uncle),tragedy(dharma adi to Maha)…and a happy end­ing for you(BSA with white paint on side tyres)!whether this is a true story or an attempt at story telling, u cer­tainly have made a decent attempt.

  2. Thanks Rajan for the com­ments. A short story can be formed from these mem­o­ries [ Form pan­ni­taaalum.. :) ]. I still like the way of writ­ing in Eng­lish and com­ment­ing the same in Tamil. Every­thing is true includ­ing the names.

  3. It was good to read this one. Since it is real and you have also nar­rated it well, it is good to read..

    Thanks

    Venkat

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